Tuesday, December 20, 2011

The Sea Of Silence

Thus I stood, firm on the shore,

Thinking what could I possibly want more?

The water is lively, the sea and its waves,

The sound echoing through caverns and caves;

The waves plunge, drag me down,

In their arms, I'm a puppet clown;

Drowning and frowning, I can't even yell,

The sea of silence can put you through hell!

Now I stand on the shore again,

Lively, they look, these waves of pain,

Splashing at my feet, now will I complain?

It asked, "Did you only suffer?"

I said, "I learnt!" :-)

\* unleash your thoughts */
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9 comments:

  1. hariDecember 20, 2011 at 11:07 PM

    Hmmm.. Sometimes its true that one's mind simply reflects others.. That too in a close friend's case its completely true.. Good wrk Raj :)

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  2. aishwarya rajDecember 21, 2011 at 1:55 AM

    liked it a lot. rhymed naturally, in the sense that it did not seem forced, :). that's a difficult thing to achieve. good work. :)

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  3. joe stephe .mDecember 21, 2011 at 2:09 AM

    good description:) nice work.. it reflects the complexity of our thoughts well..

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  4. Rajkiran RajkumarDecember 21, 2011 at 2:38 AM

    Thanks :) Just thoughts from experience :)

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  5. Rajkiran RajkumarDecember 21, 2011 at 2:38 AM

    Thank you :)

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  6. Aslan KanshawDecember 21, 2011 at 6:11 PM

    Loved it

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  7. Rajkiran RajkumarDecember 21, 2011 at 10:26 PM

    Thanks Aslan :) Read a couple of your posts. Very nice they were. Will read more in time :) Cheers!

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  8. Aina BalagtasDecember 22, 2011 at 6:54 AM

    Nice post, kudos!

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  9. Rajkiran RajkumarDecember 22, 2011 at 10:08 AM

    Thank you Aina :)

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